We have been learning create a story web
Title Uncle Jeff and the Switching Disaster
Author Cliodhna Lavery
Setting On the Island
Characters Jeff, Jessica, Ben and Granny
Beginning: Ben and his wife had 4 tickets to go Mexico.They invited Jeff and Jessica to go with them. When all of the people sat down in the plane it takes off. Suddenly the pilot announced that the plane is going to crash.
Middle:
Then it did crash. People were still alive and they got out of the plane and started to run. As they were running they saw a bottle with a paper inside it.Then they tried to open the bottle and they found a map. They kept on following the map and they reached the place where some people died.
End: They all reached home safely .
Evaluation: It is very interesting story. 10/10.
Hi there, my name is Hadia and I am a student in room 21 at Owairaka School. I really like your Story web Ayaan. It made me think of the story Web I did except it was so long. Have you thought about telling us how it was about to crash how many people died and lived and what was the bottle like. If you would like to see my learning, please visit
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